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How are you, class. I hope that all of you are fine and in a good condition. Welcome back to our subject of English 2. Today we are in the sixth meetings. We are going to discuss about writing lesson with the topic of Comparison and Contrast Paragraph. Let's start studying. You may open your English module of Lesson 3. There is the explanation of using the comparison and Contrast Paragraph. In lms I have already shared the explanation of Comparison and Contrast Paragraph too. Please to comprehend those one. I also shared the video using Comparison and Contrast Paragraph. Please to watch it and comprehend too. Today there is a forum discussion, you must choose one of some topics then you must write the similarity and the contrast of both of the things. Thanks for your attention Please be active guys....
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Compare and Contrast Structure Words
Compare and contrast structure words are transition signals which show the similarities or differences. Below are some common examples.
Compare
- Similarly
- Likewise
- also
- both... and...
- not only... but also...
- neither... nor...
- just like (+ noun)
- similar to (+ noun)
- to be similar (to)
- to be the same as
- to be alike
- to compare (to/with)
Examples
- Computers can be used to communicate easily, for example via email. Similarly/Likewise, the mobile phone is a convenient tool for communication.
- Both computers and mobile phones can be used to communicate easily with other people.
- Just like the computer, the mobile phone can be used to communicate easily with other people.
- The computer is similar to the mobile phone in the way it can be used for easy communication.
Contrast
- However
- In contrast
- In comparison
- By comparison
- On the other hand
- while
- whereas
- but
- to differ from
- to be different (from)
- to be dissimilar to
- to be unlike
Examples
- Computers, although increasingly small, are not always easy to carry from one place to another. However, the mobile phone can be carried with ease.
- Computers are generally not very portable, whereas the mobile phone is.
- Computers differ from mobile phones in their lack of portability.
- Computers are unlike mobile phones in their lack of portability.
Criteria for comparison/contrast
When making comparisons or contrasts, it is important to be clear what criteria you are using. Study the following example, which contrasts two people. Here the criteria are unclear.
- Aaron is tall and strong. In contrast, Bruce is handsome and very intelligent.
Although this sentence has a contrast transition, the criteria for contrasting are not the same. The criteria used for Aaron are height (tall) and strength (strong). We would expect similar criteria to be used for Bruce (maybe he is short and weak), but instead we have new criteria, namely appearance (handsome) and intelligence (intelligent). This is a common mistake for students when writing this type of paragraph or essay. Compare the following, which has much clearer criteria (contrast structure words shown in bold).
- Aaron and Bruce differ in four ways. The first difference is height. Aaron is tall, while Bruce is short. A second difference is strength. Aaron is strong. In contrast, Bruce is weak. A third difference is appearance. Aaron, who is average looking, differs from Bruce, who is handsome. The final difference is intelligence. Aaron is of average intelligence. Bruce, on the other hand, is very intelligent.
Example:
Write a paragraph comparing the weather in Vancouver and Halifax.The following words can help you to write a good compare and contrast paragraph:
Similarities Example is similar to Spring weather in Vancouver is similar to spring weather in Halifax. both Both Vancouver and Halifax have rain in the spring. also Halifax also has a rainy spring season. too Halifax has a rainy spring season, too. as well As well, Halifax has rainy spring season. Differences Example on the other hand On the other hand, winter is much colder in Halifax. however However, winter is much colder in Halifax. but Vancouver has a mild winter, but Halifax has a cold one. in contrast to In contrast to Vancouver, Halifax has a cold winter. differs from Halifax differs from Vancouver by having a cold winter. while While Vancouver has a mild winter, Halifax has a cold winter. unlike Unlike Halifax, Vancouver doesn't get much snow -
WRITING: COMPARISON-CONTRAST PARAGRAPH
A comparison-contrast paragraph compares two things. The differences can be large or small, depending on the goals of the writer. A compare and/or contrast paragraph is required if you are asked to examine similarities and/or differences. Compare focuses on similarities. Contrast focuses on differences.
Below are useful transitional words and phrases used for comparison and contrast.
For comparison: similar to, similarly, in the same way, like, equally, again, also, too, each of, just as so
For contrast: in contrast, on the other hand, different from, whereas, while, unlike, however, but, although, however, conversely, yet, unlike
A comparison or contrast paragraph should be tightly focused on a meaningful difference or similarity between two things, people, places or ideas. You should use specific details and
examples to explain why the difference or similarity matters. Because this is likely to be a paragraph within a larger essay that discusses three or more differences or similarities, you should focus on just one difference or similarity. Comparison or contrast essays often explain the writer's preference for one thing over the other.
┬╖ Focus Your Ideas
Brainstorm about the similarities or differences in your topics. Choose a focus from your list that gives new and worthwhile information about the topic. Rather than the obvious paragraph about the differences in color between red and green apples, for instance, you might explain how bakers would use each differently based on their different flavors. For example, green apples have a more tart flavor and so would be more appropriate for a pie than sweeter red apples, which would be a better choice for stand-alone baked apples.
┬╖ Write a Topic Sentence
Create a topic sentence to explain the comparison or contrast and its importance for your overall point as explained in your thesis. As the first sentence in your paragraph, it establishes your purpose, giving the reader an idea of your content and the reason it matters. For example, a comparison paragraph in an essay about choosing an appropriate pet might use the topic sentence, "Housebreaking procedures for dogs and cats differ greatly." The reader understands from this statement that the paragraph will analyze the differences between the two types of training, a difference important for readers unfamiliar with each to learn. The housebreaking focus could be one point in a three-point thesis that also includes the differences in time investment and compatibility with children.
┬╖ Develop with Support
Develop the paragraph with specific information to illustrate the comparison or contrast and how it supports your overall point. Include examples, detailed explanation, definitions and whatever other kind of support that makes your thinking clear. For example, to support a topic sentence about a similarity between bottled water and tap water, details might focus on the fact that both types of water have to meet similar safety and purity requirements. Tap water is regulated by the Environmental Protection Agency, and bottled water is regulated by the Food and Drug Administration, but the purity standards are similar. Include a minimum of five sentences of support for good development of your comparison or contrast.
Conclude and Tie Together
Create a concluding sentence to sum up the similarities or differences and why they matter. For example, a paragraph contrasting community colleges and universities to argue one makes a better choice might end, "These differences in price clearly show that community colleges offer excellent education without the temendous debt many universities impose on students." The paragraph on price could be one point in a thesis that also notes that community colleges offer smaller class sizes and more vocational programs. Include transitions within the body to help tie ideas together as well, using phrases like "on the other hand" or for a contrast paragraph and "in the same way" for a comparison.
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Exercise:
Choose one of these topics and then write a compare and contrast paragraph based on the topic you have chosen.
a. Online shopping and offline shopping.
b. Night Time and Day Time: Advantages Each Period Has.
c. What Makes People Completely Different from Animals.
d. Living in Poverty and Being Rich.
e. Coffee and Tea: The Effects of Both.
f. Living in Big City or Staying in Village.
g. Feeling Sad against Feeling Lonely.
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